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The Book and the Glance

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The morning commute was a symphony of predictable chaos. The screech of the train brakes, the murmur of hushed conversations, the rhythmic tapping of fingers on phone screens – all a familiar soundtrack to Elias’s daily journey. He’d been riding the same train for the past three years, his routine as ingrained as the worn leather of his seat. But lately, a new melody had crept into his routine, a melody that had nothing to do with the train’s schedule. It started subtly, a fleeting glance across the carriage. A man, sitting a few rows ahead, with a book in his hands, his face illuminated by the soft glow of the morning sun. Elias found himself drawn to him, captivated by the way his brow furrowed in concentration, the way his lips moved silently as he read. He’d catch himself staring, a blush creeping up his neck, before quickly averting his gaze, his heart pounding a little faster than usual. He’d never spoken to him, never even dared to make eye contact for longer than a fleeting second. He knew nothing about him, not his name, not his job, not even his favorite book. But he felt a strange pull towards him, a yearning to know him, to understand the quiet intensity that emanated from him. One morning, the train was unusually crowded. Elias found himself standing, squeezed between a group of chattering teenagers and a woman with a mountain of shopping bags. He was jostled around, his eyes scanning the carriage for a familiar face, a beacon of normalcy in the sea of strangers. He spotted him, the man with the book, sitting in the same spot as always. But this time, something was different. He was looking directly at Elias, his eyes meeting his across the carriage. Elias froze, his breath catching in his throat. The man’s gaze held his, a silent question hanging in the air. Elias felt a surge of heat rise in his cheeks. He quickly looked away, his heart pounding in his chest. He couldn’t believe he’d been caught staring. He felt a wave of embarrassment wash over him, a mixture of shame and a strange sense of relief. The train lurched forward, the crowd shifting, and Elias was separated from the man. He felt a pang of disappointment, a yearning for that moment to continue, for the man to look at him again. The next day, Elias found himself searching for the man, his eyes scanning the carriage with a newfound intensity. He saw him, sitting in his usual spot, his head bent over a book. Elias felt a surge of hope, a flicker of excitement. He took a deep breath, his heart pounding in his chest. He walked towards the man, his steps hesitant, his mind racing with a thousand possibilities. He reached the seat opposite the man, his hand hovering over the back of the seat, unsure of what to do next. The man looked up, his eyes meeting Elias’s. A flicker of recognition crossed his face, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. “Hi,” Elias said, his voice barely a whisper. “Hi,” the man replied, his voice warm and inviting. “You’re the guy from the train, right?” Elias nodded, a smile spreading across his face. “Yeah, I guess I am.” “I’ve been seeing you too,” the man said, his eyes twinkling with amusement. “I thought you were just staring at the ceiling.” Elias laughed, a genuine, heartfelt laugh that filled the carriage. “No, I was definitely staring at you.” The man chuckled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. “Well, I’m glad you were.” They talked for the rest of the journey, their conversation flowing effortlessly. They discovered shared interests, a love for old movies, a passion for travel, a mutual appreciation for the quiet beauty of the city. As the train pulled into Elias’s station, he felt a pang of sadness. He didn’t want the conversation to end. “I’m Liam,” the man said, extending his hand. “Elias,” he replied, shaking Liam’s hand. “It was nice meeting you.” “You too,” Liam said, his eyes holding Elias’s gaze. “Maybe we can grab coffee sometime?” Elias’s heart skipped a beat. “I’d like that,” he said, a smile lighting up his face. As he stepped off the train, Elias felt a sense of exhilaration, a feeling of possibility. He had found something unexpected, something beautiful, in the most ordinary of places. And it all started with a glance, a shared moment on a crowded train.
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How this story was created?

Story base: A man look at a man every day in the train towards her job... suddenly something happens, he look at her too.

Category: Romance

Language: English

Length: Short

Age: 18

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